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ecce homo
Contributed by
wazarov
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Join me my friends, today, in my funeral
I invite you all to enjoy my burial.
Today is my death day.. I died and vanished forever.
Hear in solemnity my funeral oration.. Today Im gone..
Im off to burry my heart and soul in the darkest abyss
never reached by men or women alone..
Today I, before you, watch my heart overthrown by a stone.
Now among you I walk as a beast dying alone.
I will not be remembered for all that love Ive done
you shall fear me from now on
because today Im here to torture and to be so cruel
Ive lost, and my heart will never ever rule.
you better come and tear me apart for the sake of me
or else my terror will consume everything in the way to god.
Copyright ©
wazarov
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2003-05-03 12:05:00]
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Re: ecce homo
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:11:23 PM AEST
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| definitely dark, your beginning is strong, in honesty the end left me a little confused.. yet your poem and mood left me wanting more:) hugs nessa |
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Re: ecce homo
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 02:35:48 PM AEST
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very very good Dean, its one that leaves you wondering...
LIndsey |
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Re: ecce homo
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 03:14:38 PM AEST
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| dear friends, as i anounced in the bigining, this is not truly a poem, i died when i wrote this invitation to all of you, to see me for the last time as the angel of love before the beast that was forced in me take over.. |
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Re: ecce homo
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by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:06:11 PM AEST
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Intense write. Great job.
Michelle |
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Re: ecce homo
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by Apartment213 on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:33:26 AM AEST
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| dean a very emotional write it really hits hard |
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