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Broken
Contributed by
Anara
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Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 09:54:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Let magic fill this broken home
Heal all the broken bones
Find what was lost
Find neutral ground
Quiet the arguments
The hurtful sounds
Protect the children
Protect the hearts
Stop this family from falling apart
Copyright ©
Anara
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2011-12-23 09:54:34]
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Re: Broken
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by aliopterix on
Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 12:56:59 PM AEST
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| What sadness lies behind these brief words...beautiful hidden sorrow. excellent write - - I hope that you have joy in your heart now - - Aliopterix |
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Re: Broken
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 02:48:44 PM AEST
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| I'm going thru this also. You say it so well, straight and to the point. I know there's hope out there. Maybe if we believe hard enough. Great write. God Bless you and yours. |
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Re: Broken
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by Jeriku on
Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 05:40:33 PM AEST
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| For not liking short poems you sure can write them.. Beautiful.. |
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Re: Broken
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by richard2 on
Saturday, 24th December 2011 @ 05:59:46 PM AEST
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Great stuff. Short or Long, poetry can be an expression
of ourselves and our ideas, our feelings and mind. You come to the essence here. Good Job. |
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Re: Broken
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by BritVent on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 06:41:00 AM AEST
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| Short but still powerful. |
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