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True Friends
Contributed by
ravi
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Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Ever been alone in a dark room?,
filled with fear and gloom,
your mind refuses to clear,
your heart crampled with fear,
The darkness chokes your numb senses,
you become desperate to break all fences.
A feeling comes; you don't know why,
you feel you are about to die.
And then you see a glimmer of light,
dispelling the darkness with radiant might.
Hope again blooms into you like a flower,
your mind gets a new lease of power.
Forgetting all things you so sorely lack,
you are back again on the life track.
True friends are like that glimmer of light,
never let them go out of sight.
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-05-03 20:05:00]
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Re: True Friends
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:09:53 PM AEST
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again an excellent write
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Re: True Friends
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 12:17:32 AM AEST
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| very nice and so true, i would be lost without my friends:) hugs nessa |
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Re: True Friends
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 11:55:41 AM AEST
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well written and nicely put. Very true!!
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Re: True Friends
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 03:33:19 PM AEST
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Very good write, Ravi.... that is exactly how I feel about my freinds..
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