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My First
Contributed by
krissy26
on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 02:30:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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The dreams of you that tell i care for you,
but i can never seem to tell you..
It has always been that man who swept me off my feet,
but suddenly i'm feeling beat..
My best friend and you..
All I say is what do I do?
I can't blame her for liking you,
nor can I blame you but suddenly I feel I don't know you,
You drift from me
leaving me though not free,
You were my first, my only,
now you have left me lonely,
I want to cry but I'm too strong for that,
I say I'm fine with that,
Knowing you don't understand
how much you hurt me, hoping for my savior from this water i'm drowning, land.
That time, my first,
was definitely my curse..
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krissy26
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2011-12-25 14:30:12]
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Re: My First
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by Anara on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 02:47:34 PM AEST
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| This is so sad and touching. Beautifully written. Truly amazing |
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Re: My First
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 03:02:49 PM AEST
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| I had a similar thing happen to me. She was my first and It was a 2.5 year relationship. I definitely cried though... not that I am proud of that. I actually wrote the very first poem on here about how it broke and remade me. |
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Re: My First
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 05:02:16 PM AEST
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| i understand you completely in this poem. i love this poem. its like reading a good book. i loved it that much. keep writing. |
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Re: My First
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by krissy26 on
Saturday, 14th April 2012 @ 02:46:38 PM AEST
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| In many of my poems I recite best friend when it means a girl close to me. As in, they were my friends. |
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