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I Don't Want To Get Hurt
Contributed by
aliopterix
on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 12:44:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Dont Want To Get Hurt
Ive missed you
So much that I
Have so much to
Say but when you
Called I just...
...stopped because
I cant control the
Feelings that are
Quite literally...
...spilling out of
Me. I love you - -
Its so easy to say
To myself but...
...to you? I
Dont know if its
What you want to
Hear and I dont
Want to get hurt
Copyright ©
aliopterix
... [
2011-12-27 12:44:21]
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Re: I Don't Want To Get Hurt
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 01:00:23 PM AEST
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| Raw emotion! I can see the woman at the phone, hear her heart pounding, waiting. It is so wonderful with imagery. thank you for sharing |
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Re: I Don't Want To Get Hurt
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by NightOwl61 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 07:37:34 PM AEST
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| I like this, the construction makes for easy reading, but the intense emotional power of the words stick with the reader even after he/she's finished. Well penned of course. tfs |
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Re: I Don't Want To Get Hurt
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th December 2011 @ 07:59:45 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Just give her a copy of this poem.
Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: I Don't Want To Get Hurt
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by angelus8663 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2011 @ 08:49:00 AM AEST
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| simply brilliant al, as has already been said, the emotion and imagery is fantastic, my hat is off to you my friend. |
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