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Shadows
Contributed by
nightowl61
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Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:08:08 PM in AEST
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I live where you live-
Where you rest-
Where you play.
I have heard
Every word
That you whispered today.
Every thought in your
Tweaky small head
I have spied.
A witness to every
Truth broken
And lied.
I have seen every
Wonder you've
Managed to see.
There isn't a secret
Too secret
For me.
Copyright 2011 Richard D. Remler
Copyright ©
nightowl61
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2011-12-29 17:08:08]
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Re: Shadows
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by crmnlilbruno on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:47:44 PM AEST
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Short and to the point and also quite unique.
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Re: Shadows
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by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 05:48:16 PM AEST
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Very interesting. I think you should have placed this in Ambiguous Poetry because there are so many open ended interpretations one can generate from this powerful work. It struck me as self reflective but could just as easily be of God or of our similarities among mankind as a kind. Those are only a few potential ideas which come from reading it for me. As I said it works better for me viewing it as self reflective. Either way you intended it, is not important just that you intended it at all, that's the beauty, the brilliance of this quick shot of poetic potency.
Really Well Done!
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Re: Shadows
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 02:46:43 AM AEST
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| Great flow,packed with meaning,can feel anger and something slightly sinister,edgy,very effective! |
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Re: Shadows
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 04:14:51 AM AEST
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You are speaking of your conscience.
Has to be. Class dismissed! LOL!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: Shadows
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 08:45:31 PM AEST
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Loved the style of this and I agree it says alot and yet leaves the reader a bit to ponder. Depth I like it.
Michelle |
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Re: Shadows
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by illuminate_the_shadows on
Tuesday, 10th January 2012 @ 01:25:44 PM AEST
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| This was a joy to read. Insightful. |
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