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my god. . . is she sleeping
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 06:26:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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my god. . . is she sleeping
my god
she is sleeping
within twilight's arms
harm, silently lost
& weeping
we sigh
last breath's
still tenderly seeping
from souls lost
to loss &
to unsafe keeping
press to your heart
like petals in pages
a memory
wishing
a solemn release
into unknown
misting. . .
oh how we'll go on
but strangely
resisting
the absence of love
within our existing
a lullaby starts
her voice, so pretty
when she was
singing
eyes like glaciers
shed tears
& saddened
they're stinging
words of acid
wrench hearts
as the end
resounds, ringing
forever is. . . so far apart
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2011-12-29 18:26:40]
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Re: my god. . . is she sleeping
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by jakereason on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 08:07:18 PM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery and perfect lightness of touch - thank you!!!!! |
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Re: my god. . . is she sleeping
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 09:44:43 PM AEST
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Hey girl, It's so good to see you posting again.
Great work as always.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: my god. . . is she sleeping
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 04:05:49 AM AEST
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Yes, so good to see you
back again. Very thought
provoking write.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (Rob) |
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Re: my god. . . is she sleeping
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by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 09:39:03 AM AEST
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I remember you from a few years back and remember your amazing gift for writing. It is refreshing to see a familiar name and this is a great reintroduction. Perfectly splendid imagery and flowing with a lightness that is both charming and captivating.
BRAVO!
DLB |
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Re: my god. . . is she sleeping
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 12:27:53 AM AEST
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You are a true artist...etching beauty into pain and making it, well, beautiful.
Tim
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Re: my god. . . is she sleeping
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by ming on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 09:39:24 AM AEST
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Ah elle! So heart wrenching...this line got me. I could 'see' a girl with hand to heart.
'press to your heart
like petals in pages
a memory
wishing
a solemn release'
And by the way, Happy and Merry all the holidays gone past!!
ming
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