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In Remembrance of the Girl That Was
Contributed by
Ciera1423
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Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 02:12:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting quietly alone in a crowd
Although she's silent, in her head she's loud
She wears a smile for everyone to see
If only someone heard her silent plea
She's screaming, still screaming, why can't you hear?
Crying inside, despite looking sincere
If only, if only, someone would look
They'd find what she lost, they'd find what he took
She's watching and waiting, just to find out
"Will someone learn what she's crying about?"
Maybe one person will learn what she hides
Even then there are potential downsides
She hates to lie but is too scared to tell
He puts up a mask and lies far too well
What if at long last, her secret is learned
And all that's accomplished is bridges burned?
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Re: In Remembrance of the Girl That Was
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 12:22:38 AM AEST
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| She wears a smile for everyone to see, for me the pivotal line,having to hide what's inside,scared, vulnerable,won't be believed,holds everything inside because of a fear of being rejected.Powerful write,very poignant to today.I get angry that a woman or a girl is expected to smile! esp as you have so effectively spelt out that they are being destroyed inside.Powerful empathic writing that hopefully will open eyes. |
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