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what the new year will bring
Contributed by
ellewood
on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 05:46:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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side by side
we walk along
facing our demons
standing strong
the love we have
will stick like glue
everything around us
will seem like anew
it may seem like a
lifetime to reach our dreams
but really my love
it may not be as long as it seems
you and me
I promise you will see
we are in this together
like two birds of a feather
we will walk the walk
talk the talk
this year our dream will come to pass
for our love for each other
will surely last
what will this new year bring you inquire
passionate love
burning like fire
lets wait and see
where we will be
for I predict we will be in each others arms
far away from any harm
and forever we will be
each others good luck charm
Copyright ©
ellewood
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2011-12-30 17:46:16]
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Re: what the new year will bring
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 06:53:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful, uplifting write.
All the best, blessings,
emy |
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Re: what the new year will bring
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by aliopterix on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 07:33:45 PM AEST
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Elegant prose that flows beautifully. Excellent presentation. Loved this - -
Alistair |
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Re: what the new year will bring
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by girish on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 09:55:39 PM AEST
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| Well expressed. sweet words since you represented the sweet thing. I love the love not the lover because it never departs |
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Re: what the new year will bring
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by mvvenkataraman on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 03:15:33 AM AEST
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Dear ellewood ,
I truly enjoyed reading this poem
My best wishes for the writer
To write more poems like this
The rhyme and rhythm are fine.
Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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