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Just
Contributed by
spike
on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 11:06:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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I know you said
I'll be back
but
just kiss me
hold me tight
and press your
cheek
to mine
tell me everything
will
be fine
and that you
will miss me
now, before
you make last
farewells...
just kiss me.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2011-12-31 23:06:18]
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Re: Just
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by elle on
Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 07:16:31 AM AEST
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Hi spike,
This farewell is so much more appropriate & accetable than so many I've experienced in the past. Might I say, possibly, farewell should bring a new beginning, (however hidden in the veil of goodbyes) instead of a distancing & severed ending. I believe, loving someone from a distance should be heralded as an art. However, we do suffer for our art, do we not. . .
Cheers in the New Year! elle |
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Re: Just
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 07:34:39 AM AEST
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Parting is "just" sweet sorrow. 'Til next year. Come back 'n' visit next year, Spike, Marti volunteered to kiss ya goodbye. Happy new year, 2012.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Just
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 08:02:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Well I certainly hope you got that kiss.
Smiles,
emy |
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Re: Just
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by ming on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 09:31:02 AM AEST
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Nice write. Made me think of two things, lost love and the old year leaving and new beginings! Or is that 3?
ming |
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Re: Just
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by spud on
Wednesday, 6th June 2012 @ 09:38:00 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
I'm not sure whether this is a fond farewell
to a living breathing person, or to another
old year - but I do hope that if it is a person,
it ended amicably and not tragically.
Either way, a fine piece of poetry, as always.
Tommy
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