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buried self
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 11:21:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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wandering
long corridors
of past
vanishing
cobwebs
with a message
under full
moon
who holds me
closer than
a secret
wrapped shadow
what makings
taunt death
our most
uncertain gift
vast the unaware
lunge of breath
unraveled far
past midnight
with grey eyes
closed and black
butterflies swarm
and darkest stars
follow the trail
of dead flowers.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2012-01-03 11:21:01]
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Re: buried self
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 02:46:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. |
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Re: buried self
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by elle on
Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 06:21:36 PM AEST
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I love this poem, ming
elle :) |
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Re: buried self
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by elle on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 05:01:33 AM AEST
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Hi ming
I had to come back one more time. This is one of my favorite reads. Bravo!
Smiles~ elle |
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Re: buried self
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th April 2012 @ 10:30:07 PM AEST
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| Puzzles take time to put together in an abstract world but I felt as if I was walking through a scene and that's what it is all about. Feelings, images, kewel! |
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