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Love's an illusion
Contributed by
discov
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Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 02:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I strated walking down the road with an angel
Then came the turn and she just walked away
Left me own my to feel the pain and agony
I am all alone again,seems like she never understood me
flashes of her memories closing on me crushing me with pain
just can't tell you what she meant to me
Deep down i know nothing will change the way i felt for her
no matter what i do, just cant keep her thoughts away
But i think its time to move on, I'm done trying
To make her feel the love i held in my heart
I've decided to give up today
I dont want her to see my pain
I'm beyond saving so stop trying
Its better we just part away.
Just want to see her one last time.
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2012-01-04 02:30:05]
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Re: Love's an illusion
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by angelus8663 on
Wednesday, 4th January 2012 @ 05:33:54 AM AEST
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| loved this, it describes my last relationship to a T so i really identified with it. I especially loved the contradiction in the last line, Brilliant work, well done |
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Re: Love's an illusion
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by girish on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 03:11:44 AM AEST
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| Love is not for separation. I unite lovers through poems. Words make all plays. speak to the loved and express your love. |
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