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Modesty Prevents...
Contributed by
aliopterix
on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 12:27:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Modesty Prevents...
Modesty prevents detailed comment
But I must say something to you
For I have touched the sky my love
When we danced the waltz of touch
I did not think to ever reach
The door to sweet Heaven above
A journey taken by but a few
That would leave us sated -- silent
When we made love we moved as one
Our rhythm slow but searching
Urging the pace to ever race
Blood building pressure in my ears
I feel faint cannot continue
Sweet release Nirvana reached
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aliopterix
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2012-01-06 00:27:58]
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Re: Modesty Prevents...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel_L_Bamberg on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 12:46:54 AM AEST
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Splendid, splendid. I must say that the time to read outstanding poetry on YPDC must be 2:00 a.m. and beyond (central time). Typically I am not awake but praise this run with insomnia. I was getting very disappointed in the content on this site. Many of the really great poets I once read on here are either gone or seemingly rarely post. This is not the first piece I have read of yours. You are an amazing and gifted talent which I will continue to seek out - if for no other reason than to avoid:
"The sky was blu
I luv u 2
Happy we knew
Da luv of few
tween da pew
we made luv tru
So how r u
dont b blu
I luv u
sweet poopy poo?"
But I will also continue to seek your work because it is profound. You have a gift to marvel and to celebrate. I am excited to know a few names that nearly guarantee an inevitable read worthy of the time and the muse.
Awesome!
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