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Windsong
Contributed by
richard2
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Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 02:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Windsong
You were dancing with her beauty,
Searching for words of love
When they were softly banished.
With a touch
So gently she dissolved the heart,
That turning, turning, left no trace
As she tore your eyes
That watched her vanish into memory
(2012)
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richard2
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2012-01-06 14:18:38]
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Re: Windsong
(User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl61 on
Friday, 6th January 2012 @ 09:15:40 PM AEST
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| This is really very good. Well crafted, well penned. A real pleasure to read. Quite a work of excellence. tfs |
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Re: Windsong
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 12:17:54 PM AEST
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Proof that much can be said in few words.
The loss is haunting; a good job here. |
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