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Stomped Upon
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I've walked that road before
Cut myself countless times
Woken up broken, bloodied, and sore
I hear the lonely peel of wind chimes
And I think what I would give to be them
I'm in a prison, hands locked on the bars
I've forgotten the definition for hope
I sigh, get some comfort out of these scars
Wishing I could summon some energy instead of only to mope
I feel like such a worthless *****
I've lost control of the many ways
The ways in which you've tried to drag me down
I've gotten sick of your verbal maze
How you belittle me, force me to wear that crown
Your droning voice makes me sick
My hands are covered in the sweet smell of blood
My memory is blotted out, oh god what did I do?
Struggling to stay afloat in this ocean of mud
I've been hear so long, can't get a clue
How to pull myself out of this mess
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-05-04 13:05:00]
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Re: Stomped Upon
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 10:03:36 AM AEST
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| I hope one day thing will be happier for you this had so much anger & pain,but well done in poetry form! Christina |
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Re: Stomped Upon
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:46:50 AM AEST
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| this is really, really good...btu also really sad...please try and smile, it's all worth it in the end... |
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Re: Stomped Upon
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by mystical_illusion on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 04:41:22 PM AEST
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I really like this one. Your words flow so well, and your emotions are clearly seen/felt etc...
excellent job,
-kelly |
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