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morning star
Contributed by
godlypoems
on
Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 01:58:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hair as golden as the sun o how it shines in blesses me with its radiance.stars of the sky hide behind the clouds of heaven for they are bright but your countenance is ever brighter.give me thy blade for to look upon thee i will gladly partake of death.for like an bakers line of work they are brown in seem to pierce the very flesh that holds me from you.is this not perfection her breast as soft as dough in lips as pink as the illuminating sky,o would i be an ripple in the ocean that is my love,my soul mate,my goddess.
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Re: morning star
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by ever1der on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 05:09:10 AM AEST
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| pretty, but I miss the line breaks that makes it look like poetry instead of prose. Just me. |
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