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Mind Revelations
Contributed by
nluchett
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Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 02:14:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Simple thoughts that enter your sight,
Become complex journeys and story lines at night.
Awake to sweat and wonder which is reality?
Are these images true? Or am I approaching irrationality?
Night after night these images repeat,
Theyre just random thoughts, nothing complete.
But in the back of my mind, they still linger around,
I cant help to wonder, is that where my answer is found?
Frequency of occurrence continues to increase,
Ignoring is not working, its tearing me at the crease.
At last I surrender, my dreams they were fire,
Down deep I extracted my souls true desire.
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nluchett
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2012-01-09 14:14:01]
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Re: Mind Revelations
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by VILenin on
Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 02:43:28 PM AEST
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| I like this, Very well written |
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Re: Mind Revelations
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by angelus8663 on
Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 04:29:19 PM AEST
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| The flow of this piece is excellent and I think everyone can relate to it. Great Job |
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Re: Mind Revelations
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by ever1der on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 05:10:57 AM AEST
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| nice job ... sometimes our thoughts do need listening to ... nice reminder |
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