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My Opinion

Contributed by Mic-Mac on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



We started out real good,
sharing our love the best we could.
Then one day I had a change of heart,
because of your best friend brian I wasn't smart.
I wanted him back at that point in time,
I just guess I was loosing my mind.
I took a break which was stupid to do,
because you loved me and I loved you.
Then I realized what I lost,
so I called you over and over and didn't care of the cost.
I think I called you fifty times,
you should have known I wanted you to be mine.
You asked me why you should take me back,
I said I loved you and that was that.
We stayed together for a week or two,
then I guess you knew what you had to do.
You took a break but i guess it wasn't enough,
because then you broke my heart and now I have no feelings and my life is really rough.
If you could only see what I feel for you,
you would probably know the right thing to do.
Now I'm with Ryan and I love him so,
But there will always be feelings for you because you had my heart to go.
I am tired of playing these games,
saying our relationship was just a shame.
I am not going to say I hate you so,
because the saying is, " Don't hate someone you can't let go".
I don't know if I would take you back,
because my feelings for you right now makes me feel like crap.





Copyright © Mic-Mac ... [ 2003-05-04 15:35:00]
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Re: My Opinion (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:58:49 PM AEST
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Oh those feelings...yah they can get you when your so down....I am glad that you have found a new love.....I wish you all the best....by the way, I really liked your poem...well done.....take care...


Re: My Opinion (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 04:17:27 PM AEST
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well written
Shari




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