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Favorite Hello, Toughest Goodbye
Contributed by
illuminate_the_shadows
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Tuesday, 10th January 2012 @ 01:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You make me smile when you're not around
You make my heart take leaps and bounds
I love the silence that lingers about
As you breathe in and I breathe out
You stopped my wounds from coming undone
In the coldest hour, you became my sun
Though you're filled with secrets, like the sea
I pray that one day, you'll share them with me
The way you touch me, it just feels right
Can't help it if I want to stay all night
There's just nowhere else I'd rather be
Than wrapped in your arms; believe me
Forget the past; what matters is this
I've discovered that love is hit and miss
But there's something different about you
One plus one equals more than just two
I'll stick around, just don't make me cry
I'll be your favorite hell and your toughest goodbye.
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2012-01-10 13:42:05]
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Re: Favorite Hello, Toughest Goodbye
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by Mikki on
Wednesday, 11th January 2012 @ 12:17:35 PM AEST
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D'AWWWWW
The title was what really drew me in, and the line "one plus one equals more than just two" was awesome. I loved the entire poem, except for that spelling error in the end that really would have changed the poem A LOT if I didn't know it was supposed to say "hello". xD
But this was amazing, no doubt. My attempts at poetry like this always end in failure, but this was phenomenal!
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