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my creation
Contributed by
MissMichelle
on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I created you
to escape the world
i created you
in the thought of being alright
i created you
to please everybody
i created you
to protect myself
but somewhere I've lost control
and disappeared in you
I'm in here
but you can't see through
Copyright ©
MissMichelle
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2003-05-04 19:05:00]
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Re: my creation
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 04:26:56 PM AEST
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MissMichelle, how pleased I am to be first to comment and rate your poem!
Its was mysterious to me at first, then it dawned on me; you are describing yourself, as the false identity that you have presented yourself to be! Very good work!
I hope you let the real you come to the surface now, if you haven't already. Maybe you are still looking for you????
Your friend, Bizzy |
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