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Hunting list
Contributed by
MissMichelle
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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How come, the rain dosen't stop
from falling down on me
i guess i was to blind to see
all this pain and hurt
you given me
wasent just temporary
It made deep scars inside
they wont fade in a blick of an eye
they are carved real deep into my mind
peace, i will never finde
now tell me, why did you have to go and do this?
was i just another victim on your hunting list?
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MissMichelle
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2003-05-04 20:05:00]
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Re: Hunting list
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 09:49:56 AM AEST
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Your poem suree tells of your plight..
You had better shine up your armor... |
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Re: Hunting list
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by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 10:05:10 PM AEST
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| Another wonderful write you have great style and grace in your work. |
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Re: Hunting list
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:15:53 PM AEST
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| Wow good poem i like it alot....god job keep writing. |
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