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Bedlam
Contributed by
Tracy
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 06:04:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Bed maker, bed maker,
make me a bed.
Just one more cradle
to rock myself dead.
For the mattress, barbed wire,
and thistle-filled sheets;
a pillow of pain
that just cant be beat.
A blanket of guilt?
A duvet of temptation?
A sham of control,
that is my salvation!
Color the whole thing
an unfaithful blue
(the shade of a heart
that just cant stay true).
Bed maker, bed maker,
make me a bed
a place that I crave
to lay my forked head.
Bed maker, bed maker,
please, dont you quit!
Make me a bed
so I can lie in it.
Copyright ©
Tracy
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2012-01-18 06:04:10]
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Re: Bedlam
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 08:19:12 AM AEST
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I have had these days...almost every day. I can relate.
Nice writing and  to YPDC!
Tim |
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Re: Bedlam
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by girish on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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| you need not have a bed you need peace of mind think creatively I have one hand one eye one leg still I live happily I am married and have a kid and I am employed read my poems I serve others |
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Re: Bedlam
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by spud on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 06:42:53 AM AEST
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Hi Tracy
Just had to visit your page after sampling
your last 2 poems.
Yip! Agree your sentiments - can get like
that sometimes. I love the comparison with
Bedlam.
Tommy
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