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Shattered
Contributed by
DukeW
on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 08:17:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tick tock,
Goes the clock.
Ice, fire, endless,
Days, months, years countless...
Shrouded in darkness and fear,
No food, no watter, no hope left here.
Forever broken, forever shattered,
The land, soaked in pain, sad and tortured.
Endless is every moment,
No sound, no movement.
There is a light far away,
Salvation one may hope and pray.
Hope and pray,
Think and say...
The light is the future,
Hells blaze of eternal torture.
Copyright ©
DukeW
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2012-01-18 08:17:12]
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Re: Shattered
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 11:36:35 AM AEST
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| I too write to let the anguish, demons out. I feel the pain in your words, the torment in thought. I try to remember that there is always hope, that's what I try to add to the end of my heartache wretch pain poems. I see the hope in yours. Great write, so full of feeling and thought. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Shattered
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by girish on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 11:27:45 PM AEST
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| I understand the pain but what`s the reason Sorrows can be overcome love failures can be solved do not depend act and overcome your faith and your action are the input. I have only one eye, one hand, one leg but still I survive and I am married live happily |
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Re: Shattered
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by krissy26 on
Friday, 20th January 2012 @ 09:44:27 AM AEST
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| I felt your pain and the emotion clearly. Quite a poem. Wonderful:) |
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