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IN SHADOWS
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 02:59:28 PM in AEST
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oops
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Life gave a true friend,
Love with out an end.
Since our hearts touched
We've been thru so much.
In shadows, loves beckoning call.
Can with stand through it all.
Nothing can take our love away.
Even in shadows it will stay.
Over mountains, down the line
Our love will for ever shine.
Down cross roads and curves,
Nothing can replace this love.
So what if we're mostly apart,
This love will touch in our hearts.
Friendship that can only grow
As life and destiny takes its toll.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2012-01-18 14:59:28]
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Re: IN SHADOWS
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by ReincarnatedAsAZebra on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 02:57:13 PM AEST
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| Maby not the best gammar or rythm, but it really has the right feeling to it. |
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Re: IN SHADOWS
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by girish on
Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 11:25:09 PM AEST
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| Live with Others Valentine for Ever is what love is all about. I love all my masses wherever they are. Nice write and thanks for sharing. |
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Re: IN SHADOWS
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by JohnnyFallen on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 07:43:49 PM AEST
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*clears throat* Before I comment on your poem, I would like to say I am surprised at the number of poems you have! X_X
Now, I like that poem. Sounds like you lost a friend? That's sad, but friendship goes on even after Death. I like the tone of this poem. Good writing!
- Johnny |
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