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Birds fall from the sky.
Contributed by
MyPoetic_Life
on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 07:56:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Birds fall from the sky.
Just like we all fall from Happiness
Forward in flight.
On the way to paradise.
But the winds of the storm stops us.
Throwing us off course.
Carrying us away like a thief with jewels in the night.
Until it finds a spot, to drop us face first.
Some die along the way down.
While others fight to survive to fly another day.
You see, I been through this storm before.
Although I cant control it.
I just go with the flow.
I felt the ground before,
And I will feel it again.
You just have to know how to land and Fly again.
In a different direction..
Some say its a plague but, I think its just life..
We all fall, Even the Angels.
Birds fall from the sky.
Just like we all fall down in life
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Re: Birds fall from the sky.
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by Oliverjhenry13 on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 08:06:53 PM AEST
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| I really like this. I thing that if you put a solid rhyme sceme in this it could be better. Love the concept! |
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Re: Birds fall from the sky.
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by MyPoetic_Life on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 08:27:30 PM AEST
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| Thats a really good idea Thanks a lot!! Appreciate the feedback. |
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Re: Birds fall from the sky.
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd January 2012 @ 12:50:35 PM AEST
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Great comparison.
Good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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