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Me and the moon
Contributed by
MissMichelle
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Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I cannot escape the moon. Its soft beams push aside the curtains at night. I don't even have to see it -- a cool blue energy falls across my bed and I am up. I race down the dark hall and swing open the door, not to leave home but to go back into it. "Moon, I'm here!" You're embracing light keeps me alive You're wonderful presence makes me wanna fly high up in the sky be by your side shine with you, guarding the earth saying hallo to the stars introducing my selves as there friend I just want to find my magic i want to find my place and where a belong and help the world to be more wonderful and peaceful so i can watch over the people to make sure they're alright!
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MissMichelle
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2003-05-04 20:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Me and the moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ravi on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 11:39:47 AM AEST (User
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This is a beautifully written poem.I can read right through your mind in this poem. |
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Re: Me and the moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by wordsmith on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 02:28:40 AM AEST (User
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This is such a compassionate poem with tenderness and something special that enlightens. I feel that intimate sharing that you are expressing, and I know the vision that you have for the world. |
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