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Eternity
Contributed by
foreverandalways
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Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 03:15:36 AM in AEST
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Eternity
Heart frozen lost at sea, half the man I used to be.
You took my light put out the flame, left me here with all this pain.
Closed the door on hopes and dreams, a life together gone it seems.
No going back or turning round, our past left broken on the ground.
Now in my heart a gaping hole, from which escapes my fleeting soul.
A spectre I have come to be, to walk alone for eternity.
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2012-01-25 03:15:36]
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Re: Eternity
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by rowzipops on
Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 04:54:39 PM AEST
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