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ode to a dirty old man
Contributed by
cr0wb4r777
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Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 09:33:16 PM in AEST
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I messed up badly
I put my hands down
He said do it or do nothing at all
he said "don't try"
I starve in the same air
I drown in the same places
I am now of his form
and there can be no rules
but one and only one rule
to push and to push so hard
that I fail or that I die
sorry I forgot
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Re: ode to a dirty old man
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th January 2012 @ 09:48:36 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Short but good.
Blessings,
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