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Road To Redemption(Pt. I)
Contributed by
Blackheart
on
Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 05:56:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like the greatest burden to my sister
The cause of all her pain and tears
And I'm only making it worse
As long as I'm here
No I can't stand on my own yet
... I'm not self-sufficient
But what if just like you
Life forced me into that position
Into a worse-case-predicament
Would I have proper vision
To make self-best decisions
Or would I put myself in situations like Daren or Desmond
Live in a "Greenhouse" or get a girl pregnant
I turn to Professor Life and tell 'em
I'm ready for my greatest lesson
He says "Pack your things
All your needs & wants
It's time to leave your homefront"
I take all the burdens I brought into her life that are my own
Say one last goodbye to her and my home
February 24, 2012
I'm responsible for myself
I walk alone......
Professor Life: Today's lesson - Growing Up. (He walks away)
Donavan: Wait, where you going?
Professor Life: Exactly the point. I'll see you in 4 years at graduation. Good luck! I know you'll do great.
Donavan: (sighs)...Well, let's get started...
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2012-02-01 17:56:54]
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Re: Road To Redemption(Pt. I)
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 07:52:06 PM AEST
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Great writing. I'm sure she would rather have you there 'cause she'll worry about you.
It's really good that you respect her and luv her that much.
You both sound like very special people.
You writing is awesome. Keep writing and use the great tool that God has given to you.
Blessings,
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