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pain in me
Contributed by
fluffy42
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Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 08:11:01 PM in AEST
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Wanting this internal pain to become
external pain that I can handle this
I tend to hurt me more and more
looking at the blade of steel
I need an sharper edge
maybe if I bleed it will come out of me
this feelings inside of me
anger fear regret loneliness love hate
can I get rid of this blind rage
I keep wanting to bleed or let bleed
trying to keep this beast under control
I may be to weak
why do I need you
what is it that I think you can do
will I climb to high and fall so far
I will let this ink be my blood
but will it be enough
I need a warm embrace
it will help me feel safe
I use to be so care free
now I lost control inside me
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Re: pain in me
(User Rating: 1 )
by twriters on
Saturday, 4th February 2012 @ 04:33:57 PM AEST
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| This is a moving poem. You use words concisely to paint a strong picture - the image of bringing internal pain to the surface is a purging. a longing for renewal. Well done |
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