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Emotion
Contributed by
CoLDness
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Friday, 10th February 2012 @ 06:59:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm falling apart,
I'm dying inside,
there's nowhere to go,
and nowhere to hide,
I look to the future,
but I'm stuck on the past,
How long will it take,
how long will this pain last,
Dizzy and confused,
lost in directions,
I pray to the lord,
my only salvation,
my eyes are done crying,
my emotions are shot,
I'd like to write more,
but that's all I got.
Copyright ©
CoLDness
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2012-02-10 18:59:09]
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Re: Emotion
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th February 2012 @ 09:13:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I think we can all relate.Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Emotion
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 05:17:24 AM AEST
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| good work. n welcome to ypc . just wished other's would comment on my poems...:( |
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Re: Emotion
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by Raggie on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 06:57:14 AM AEST
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As if by magic another comment appeared:)
I enjoyed your use of rhyme. I admired your ability to weave emotional hurt into clarity.
There is some truth in the saying that what doesn't kill us, serves to make us stronger.
I wish you well:) |
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