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Soul
Contributed by
DreamCatcher
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Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I look at you, you look at me.
We judge our thoughts by what we see.
A body's just a place a place to hide
A person's soul that dwells inside.
Look within the eyes of all
For therein lies the key to their soul.
Look beyond and you'll begin
To see the soul that lies within.
A quiet boy who stands apart
Look to his eyes and see his heart.
Strange and distant all alone
Reach out to him, learn of his soul.
The soul is seen within ones eyes
For therein ones true spirit lies.
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DreamCatcher
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2003-05-05 14:05:00]
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Re: Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:50:37 PM AEST
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| beautiful! hugs nessa |
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Re: Soul
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by Dot on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:40:15 PM AEST
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| This truly is a lovely poem-you have soul, my dear that reaches into the souls of others. Perception, it's called. Great job. Write more. Dot |
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Re: Soul
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:59:22 PM AEST
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| Great poem ... love the message behind this. Excellent write ... Jan |
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Re: Soul
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:40:01 PM AEST
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your words ring true, the soul is what counts,inner beauty if the most magnificent beauty of all
Shari |
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Re: Soul
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:03:52 AM AEST
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Really lovely poem....
Jenni |
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Re: Soul
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by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM AEST
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It's not right to judge and it's cool, always walk a mile in the person past and walk a mile in their future before you begin to judge them.
Always
Amy |
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Re: Soul
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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Hi, DreamCatcher, its Bizzy. I came to read your poems and you do a good job.
This one says alot for knowing people. The eyes do reveal alot, then, time will prove whether you read the eyes accurately. |
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