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one day waiting
Contributed by
Apartment213
on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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im held up breaking the silence with cries
im bottomed out wrecking my mind for peace
i was cought red handed laughing amusing myself alone
dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming
could u wreck this and forget me
could u find me standing on my own
with my eyes shut closed hoping u'll feed me
i never picked a fight, i couldnt hold my own to
i do believe u took the best of me
im sick of songs they all end the same
dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming
could u wreck this and forget me
could u find me standing on my own
with me eyes shut closed hoping u'll feed me
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Re: one day waiting
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:53:55 PM AEST
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| great write! i love this line it is excellent,"dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming" you've shown quite vivid emotion and images:) hugs nessa |
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Re: one day waiting
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:55:27 PM AEST
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| Love this poem! Great words, great flow ... excellent write. ... Jan |
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Re: one day waiting
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 02:01:15 AM AEST
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kenny, i love you...i love you mroe then words could ever say...you're the best thing that has ever happened to me and im never going to let you get away....you're stuck with me forever...perfection...just beautiful...
Lindsey (Your Angel) |
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Re: one day waiting
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by SomethingClever on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 02:48:18 AM AEST
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Shocking... it's been a lot better, friend. As for the both of you... for shame... :)
You've come a long way, at least in my opinion. |
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Re: one day waiting
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:34:43 AM AEST
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Well done on this!
I enjoyed reading it! Christina |
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