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heartless man
Contributed by
nicole2003
on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 12:29:00 PM in AEST
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heartles souls are every where, your lies poison the air.
your true self has finnaly came out, there is no where
to hide. your lies has poison my brain, as your heartless
soul has hurt my body. i sit here watching you crawl back
to me like a boy infant. i hear your apologies, and you
begging me to forgive you. i laugh in your face telling you
its lies! its all lies i say!
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2012-02-12 12:29:00]
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Re: heartless man
(User Rating: 1 )
by lisasolorio1 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 01:08:41 PM AEST
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Like with the other poem I commented on I see some errors. To be perfectly honest I believe you have a realistic approach on your poetry and maybe with a little more practice you will do well. But thats only my opinion. I like your style.
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