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hurting
Contributed by
nicole2003
on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 12:43:12 PM in AEST
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darkness has filled my heart as it shreads to peices.
my body weakins, and my soul is lost. tears of blood
streames down my face, i hurt once again. the rays of
sun shines threw the dark clouds as i watch it turning black.
the lightning strikes as i am breaking apart, i listen to the willows
wheeping, as they can feel my pain. what is there left now other
than that trail of pain that fallows me? the black hole is getting
bigger leaving me falling. how can i get out? i just keep fallin,
down the hole nothing to hold on to. never ending, i feel the blood
rushing threw out my body and yet still nothing
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Re: hurting
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by lisasolorio1 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 01:05:21 PM AEST
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You have one spelling error in the beginning and your poem drags on a tiny bit but I can relate to the pain your person has and it feels alot like the way you described it.
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