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Untitled Love Song
Contributed by
purplestary
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Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 02:54:40 PM in AEST
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So I've been dying to run,
Hell, something new could be fun,
because lately each day feels like a re-run.
but the thing is that with you
all my feelings are true,
and everything is so safe,
in a world that is so..unsafe.
and at times it can all get a little hard,
and NOT running sometimes cuts like a glass shard.
but in the end i am stronger for not walking away
and i thank God for my choice to stay.
So these are the words of a runner made tame
by a love song that has no name.
written by a girl who is starting to see
that WE can be better than ME.
Copyright ©
purplestary
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2012-02-17 14:54:40]
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Re: Untitled Love Song
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 05:37:11 PM AEST
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Great writing. Very creative.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Untitled Love Song
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by Ellewood on
Saturday, 18th February 2012 @ 06:30:31 AM AEST
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| I like it! Nice writing ,thank you for sharing. :) Remember even though a poem may be short, it is the words that make it what it is . |
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Re: Untitled Love Song
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by hray42 on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 10:21:34 AM AEST
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| well, once again very "human".. and very good.. the way you write is so friendly, so personable.. there's nothing "madeup" there.. i feel that a lot of my poems are just stories that rhyme.. not a crime or wrong.. but your poems seem to be very personal and about you.. that's why i believe them... |
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