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Rain
Contributed by
Kailas
on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 08:33:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Washing away the day before
Forgetting all the mistakes,
it starts to pour
Puddles turn into lakes
The thunder claps
Clouds are gloomy and tall
The lightning zaps
Drip,Drip,Drop the rain starts to fall
Tears flow from a cloud
Then it starts to pound
Rain is falling all around
Copyright ©
Kailas
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2012-02-20 08:33:43]
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Re: Rain
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 12:39:52 PM AEST
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| Very nice, great write. I really enjoyed this. I could hear the rain falling all around me. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Rain
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by DrogedaRain on
Tuesday, 21st February 2012 @ 10:21:35 AM AEST
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| The imagery is wonderful in such a short poem. I adore this, made me smile.. |
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