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Abandoned Footwear
Contributed by
kellison339
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Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 11:43:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lashing against the cold wet concrete, Its laces untethered and worn, the sole black beaten boot weeps.
As the deserted traveler sits in its flooded gutter home On the cracked pavement, Sharply dressed city creatures With Rolexes and Chanel cologne Avert their eyes.
Its brother rests in a Distant tomb of rotting flesh, With discarded pictures And broken lamps, Basking in the noble exhaust Of the remnants of routine; A proper arrangement.
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kellison339
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2012-02-20 11:43:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Abandoned Footwear
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 12:36:45 PM AEST (User
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Very clever and original write. I enjoyed it very much. Great write, liked the flow and the imagery. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Abandoned Footwear
(User Rating: 1 ) by bmjones0555 on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 07:32:39 PM AEST (User
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WOW!! very nice |
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Re: Abandoned Footwear
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st February 2012 @ 06:53:47 AM AEST (User
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Luv your writing.
blessings,
emy |
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