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Ocean Breaths
Contributed by
nluchett
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Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 06:24:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The motions of water breathes out on the shore,
Inhaling, it recedes deep into the depths of liquid from before,
We take it for granted, a missed signpost,
Mother Nature follows suit on the banks of her coasts.
She breathes in the morning at first light,
Exhales in the mist, while her waves reach higher heights,
Some places require deeper breaths of love,
Others gentle, like the spiritual flights of a dove.
Our mortal skin will one day take its last breath,
Some say it is our final death,
But our spirits continue on, exhaling on the banks of the shore,
Inhaling, receding deep into the depths of liquid from before.
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nluchett
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2012-02-20 18:24:52]
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Re: Ocean Breaths
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by bmjones0555 on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 07:29:28 PM AEST
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| Not to bad, good write! |
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Re: Ocean Breaths
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by Kailas on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 05:25:08 PM AEST
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| nice, your words remind me of when I was little living right near the beach. :) |
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