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strange
Contributed by
HIV
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Saturday, 25th February 2012 @ 09:04:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Here I am different in this normal world
I can feel you all laughing at me,why is this world so cold to people like me
please don't hate me,yes I know I'm strange
You say you know me just fine!
You know the master of disguise!
Every one calling me so strange!
Then they laugh and walk away....
As I walk I can never seem no escape all the laughing all the pain
I know every one around me,yes I know what you will say
I am ugly now get out of the way,
You say you know me just fine!
You know the master of disguise!
Every one calling me so strange!
Then they laugh and walk away...
I'm just a freak what ever you call it,counting me names I think I finally lost it
forget all you people who think that I'm strange,
you don't know me so find some one else to blame,
yes I know that I'm,STRANGE! nobody likes me cause they think that I'm,INSANE!
every one making me feel like some animal locked up in a cage..
every one please just let me be me.
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HIV
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2012-02-25 09:04:18]
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Re: strange
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2012 @ 09:33:48 AM AEST
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Truly, what is really normal? Depending on perspective, you could be the normal one and everyone else judging you could be the strange ones.
I liked this poem very much. One is, while I don't know your exact siutation, I know these types of feelings...of everyone thinking I'm strange and wanting them to just leave me alone. Also, I like the way you dish it out in poetic verse.
Nicely done.
Please don't take offense, just didn't understand this little bit:
As I walk I can never seem no escape
Or is it a typo?
Guess it could be as I walk I can never see no escape or as I walk I can never seem to escape.
Take care,
Tim
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