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Searching For A Ghost
Contributed by
hray42
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Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 10:42:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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searching through tombs and catacombs
looking for the ghost of what once was you
crawling over the bones of the dearly departed
hoping that you may have left a clue
searching in attics and basements alike
flashlight in hand, peering through dusty light
i spy everywhere, but i remain in despair
as i never get you into my sight
not giving up, i go down by the brook
but i find nothing but a weeping moon
i walk all about as leaves crunch underfoot
just wishing that i may get to see you soon
searching through towers and dungeons both
by torchlight i look for the ghost of my love
inspecting in the cracks, i try as i might
as i feel like jumping from the heights above
when i feel that i have searched the last spot
when i think that i have reached the end
i will just simply stop and turn around
and i will start my whole search again...
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Re: Searching For A Ghost
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by alicewhite on
Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 10:54:58 PM AEST
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| thats a really good poem, |
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Re: Searching For A Ghost
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by Blankman on
Friday, 2nd March 2012 @ 04:17:50 AM AEST
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| I dont really see poems as good. Cause they all tell an impornent message whom ever wrote them! but i this poem takes place in visionary labyrinth |
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Re: Searching For A Ghost
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by shelby on
Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 12:31:45 AM AEST
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Descritptive poem I love it
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Re: Searching For A Ghost
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 08:24:20 AM AEST
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| i really loved this poem. i like when you write dark like this. and there is nothing more inspiring to a writer then a lost love as sad as it is..i find it really difficult to be inspired to write anything when i am happy go lucky, and things are looking up. usually it is the dark side that brings out our best creativity. |
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