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It hurts
Contributed by
slavka
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Friday, 2nd March 2012 @ 06:36:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You and I, it was so beautiful
minds dwel in fantasy so hurtful
unbelieveable reality that she has you
see my eyes.I'm a lunatic tonight
In the skies shins a full moon not quiet right
don't say a word just follow me
don't explain because its only you i see
i feel you on my lips
your hand in my hand, perfectly it fits
if it wasn't love, what was it?
It was a game running through my veins
invading swiftly, you've posioned me
I thought my love was in your hand
beating loud, you my love cannot command
I'm sorry I wasn't perfect but I could have made you happy.
You and I that's what we were
broken fragments have you told her?
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slavka
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2012-03-02 06:36:15]
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Re: It hurts
(User Rating: 1 )
by HIV on
Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 01:33:48 PM AEST
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I feel you.... every word you wrote I could feel the emotions such a lovely but hart breaking piece of work.... I love it I hope your able to get past your troubles.
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Re: It hurts
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by shelby on
Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 12:26:09 AM AEST
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A relationship loss is a loss. Mourn but then move forward. I wont say time heals all wounds or with time it gets better........ I will say the wounds though painful make you stronger later in life. I am sorry your heart is broken........ You will be fine and shine again, and the person who left you doesn't deserve you. Remember that, it is easy in times of loss to forget how special we really are. You are special.
Keep writing and sharing
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