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Eyes
Contributed by
Cellardoor666
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Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 03:10:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to take your eyes home
They're so pretty to me
I think this might sound strange
But can I have them please?
If I had your eyes I could look at them alone
And they would not tell lies
Imaginations wouldn't roam
So let me take your eyes
I swear that it won't hurt
Vulnerability doesn't suit me
It's a lesson I have learnt
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Re: Eyes
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 03:47:44 AM AEST
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| Slightly disturbing, but it also intrigues me. Also... I love your user name. The most beautiful phrase in the English language. :) |
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Re: Eyes
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 05:59:31 AM AEST
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| i liked it -cool |
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Re: Eyes
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by CARAAAAA on
Wednesday, 7th March 2012 @ 12:26:02 AM AEST
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| like it |
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Re: Eyes
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by hray42 on
Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 02:06:16 PM AEST
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| you have me laughing again.. i do like the way you write these little poems so much to the point.. they're short and sweet.. well, maybe not so sweet.. i enjoyed it.. thanks.. |
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