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A fairy Tale
Contributed by
gailj1432
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Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 07:00:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Just a Fairy Tale
Did you ever wake up and reach for me
Thinking that's where I will always be
I have those dreams but I open my eyes
And in a few moments the happiness dies
Why didnt my favorite dream come true
To grow old and still be in love with you
Each night I just can't resist
to dream of what can never exist
All I have to do is close my eyes
Because in the darkness, happiness lies
Dream with me and share the joy and laughter
Because only in my dreams we live Happy Ever After..........
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2012-03-06 07:00:54]
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Re: A fairy Tale
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 11:27:08 AM AEST
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You've got a really great flow thing goin' on. With that talent aside, this poem is the classic love story theme, but you still penned it with that beautiful sadness. Made me wanna cry. Definitely my story and so many others, I'm sure.
Thank you,
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