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BLACK DEATH
Contributed by
hray42
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Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 04:34:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i could hear him, but could not see through the mist and fog i could hear him gallop, but still i fought that visual bog i felt the ground shake, as he seemed to pick up speed i had dreamt of him, this unseen and unknown steed i looked in utter terror, directly into the midnight abyss its depth seemed so endless, an image i will never miss i stood there totally still, not able to move at all i wished to flee to safety, leave that morbid and macabre death ball so swiftly and so suddenly, his hooves rumbled forward like a train a form appeared then lightly, its edges dark, but it still seemed plain in a short time i came to realize, that this ghost was not going to stray at that moment he came right for me, and i wondered if i should pray as his outline became more clear, and i could see in better detail i realized my ghost was a demon, and he came here straight from hell his eyes were burning bright red, he had smoke coming from his large nose he seemed to be breathing out fire, my demise was quite near i supposed he was black, blacker than anything before, so impossibly black his mouth was gaping wide open, and i could hear his rotten teeth clack just as i thought i'd met my end, at the moment i thought that he'd strike he stopped and stood before me, we were both still and just alike i could smell him then, he stank of disease and death it came from over his body, and it came from his nasty breath he studied me for a bit, then he stood up on hind legs that's when i started to scream, closed my eyes and began to beg when his front half came back down, it shook like a bomb in my face the shock wave went right through me, covered that unholy nightmare place he stared once more right at me, breathed a flame just over my head he then turned around and bolted, actually it was more as if he fled i watched as he disappeared, he seemed to be swallowed up whole by the abyss that spewed him forth, by whatever has owned his soul finally able to move, i found myself walking away i traveled throughout the night, until it gave in to day i'll forever remember what happened, i hope you believe what i've said for you never want to wander, where the abyss may find you instead...
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Re: BLACK DEATH
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 01:32:42 AM AEST (User
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beautifully penned, you write dark so impeccably,
this has such excellent flow that once again it
held my interest all the way to the last brilliant
line; and when i looked back it was perfect rhyme, i'm not going outside tonight lol,
hugs n' love nessa |
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