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SAILING FOR A LOST EDEN
Contributed by
hray42
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Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 04:41:32 AM in AEST
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there is a ship sailing throughout the night
it's on a steady course to find a long lost Eden
no variation in direction, no matter however slight
with weary souls on board, and no one there to lead them
this ship is steaming full, with energy and might
its engines are screaming to push the vessel through
this scene will be played out until the early light
when the ship will vanish with passengers and with crew
many have seen the ghost ship on its eternal trip
they've witnessed it making headway on the salty seas
and have seen it disappear when time and space did rip
then was folded back until time was made to crease
will this ghost ever reach what it so boldly sails for?
will it manage to keep its bearing, and keep its main deck even?
i think that there are those who think that it's searching for something more
than a destination widely rumored to be a lost Eden...
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hray42
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2012-03-13 04:41:32]
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Re: SAILING FOR A LOST EDEN
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 06:00:54 AM AEST
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oh i like this one, it reminds me of a poem i wrote long ago, but yours is much better...
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Re: SAILING FOR A LOST EDEN
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by shereal_14 on
Friday, 16th March 2012 @ 10:25:13 PM AEST
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| Love it! Keep 'em coming! |
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