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emptiness. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 05:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I long to fall. . .
to love again. . .
even if it meant
the end of me
I long to hold you. . .
your sea-kissed gaze
salty & stinging,
an iris treasure
near rainbow's end. . .
shades of heaven awaiting me
I long. . . I savor. . .
I beg. . . entreat. . .
& sometimes, solemn
I sit with sunset
cliffs a' looming,
spray rides the breeze
back to the sea
I simply sit
in evenings splendor
& quietly caress your memory
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2012-03-13 05:23:23]
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Re: emptiness. . .
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by hray42 on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 07:48:23 AM AEST
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| i really like this poem.. the line about the sea-kissed gaze is great.. i don't think i could come up with that in a million years.. take care.. |
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Re: emptiness. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 08:13:55 AM AEST
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Loneliness sucks but "caressing memories" does have a tendency to help. I soooooooooooooooooooo love your poetry and miss it (you) when it is not regularly posted. You are definitely gifted.
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Re: emptiness. . .
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by richard2 on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 09:25:27 AM AEST
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I too like this poem
the sea as something bigger than our feelings
thus somehow healing for memories and loss.
I can relate
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