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Innocent Blood
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 04:19:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drip... Drip... Drip... it falls upon the ground,
the secret it is keeping... denies its peaceful sound,
Drip... Drip...Drip... it forms a small red pool,
can you not see them there? just blind or yet the fool?
Drip... Drip... Drip... in crimson they do lie,
come wash your hands in innocence.... while the wounded cry,
Drip... Drip... Drip... can you hear their silent screams?
Drip... Drip... Drip... these innocent that bleed.
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deusdeira
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2012-03-14 04:19:43]
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Re: Innocent Blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 06:34:33 AM AEST
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Reminds me of the Foxe's Book Of Martyrs,
which your poem seems to describe. It's
a sad commentary on the human condition,
but told eloquently here.
Blessings, Rob |
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Re: Innocent Blood
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 10:46:38 AM AEST
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| I think the repetition of the drip, drip, drip, really gave this poem more power. The images it brought to mind....yeah, gad, dark and scarey. |
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Re: Innocent Blood
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 11:41:17 AM AEST
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| oh this is another really good one from you, I like your style... |
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Re: Innocent Blood
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by HIV on
Thursday, 15th March 2012 @ 11:31:52 AM AEST
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| this is really good every time i read it something comes to mind whats it about ? i think i know just to need to make sure... |
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