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Hold Me
Contributed by
raymondsincere
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Sunday, 18th March 2012 @ 01:55:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to be held with open arms, with love, with locked eyes, I want to be held with words, hold me with real true comfort
form the bottom of your heart, hold me when I struggle, hold me when I cry. Hold me when Ive done wrong , but show me in so many ways
how to live on. Hold my head close to your heart beat when your window pane is not easy, hold me for when I show you the best and most grateful things in life, which is God and love, please just hold me, will you just hold me. You know all my faults , my rights and my wrongs, I
just want to be held forever long...
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2012-03-18 13:55:39]
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Re: Hold Me
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by HIV on
Monday, 19th March 2012 @ 11:39:37 AM AEST
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shows some emotion i think thats what counts in poetry and definetly in songs.
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