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When will I learn?
Contributed by
M
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Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Am I ever gonna learn
That I'm worth more than I accept?
When am I gonna learn
Not to settle for less?
I threw myself down
Into this pit
Of eternal pain and torment.
And now I lie at the bottom
Regretting every day of my existence
Wishing I had a different sentence,
Knowing I can't climb up the fallen distance.
Am I ever gonna learn?
I know I'm worth more than the scars that dance upon my skin.
When am I gonna learn?
I seem to get less than I give.
It's all my fault,
I'm my own dark omen
A haunting silhouette
With nails to scratch
Away at my sins,
Tainting my body.
Am I ever gonna learn?
When am I ever gonna learn?
Wake me up to reality,
Please, come and save me;
I'm blinded by the pain.
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M
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Re: When will I learn?
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by JamesHowlett on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 07:11:17 PM AEST
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very nice.
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Re: When will I learn?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 11:55:59 AM AEST
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"the scars that dance upon my skin" - great line! I like this, it's artistic and enjoyable. Very touching. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: When will I learn?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 12:17:53 PM AEST
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Yet another great write. Please don't take this patronisingly but you have such a HUGE talent for someone so young. Keep up the great work!!
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Re: When will I learn?
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by Jilli_bean on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 03:02:58 PM AEST
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| ........i can share the same type of feelings with this poem ....when will i learn....you keep refusing and refusing help..until it is to late. Your very artistic...don't let the world never see your gift ...when will you learn...how bout today ? |
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Re: When will I learn?
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:59:28 PM AEST
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like i said, beautiful, really beautiful. keep hanging on M..
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Re: When will I learn?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:33:45 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful poem em...whenever you need saving just shout and i promise i'll be there...i am never more than a phone call away...oh baby, i love you so much, i don't know what i'd do if i lost you...you're so special...never let go...i'm holding on for you... |
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Re: When will I learn?
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by harmoni on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:51:49 AM AEST
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| VERY SAD GREAT EXPRESS SOMETIMES WE NEED SOMEONE TO GIVE US HAND . KEEP TRYING IT'S NEVER TOO LATE! |
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